The problem isn’t the model
Cold email written by an LLM sounds like cold email written by an LLM. The instinct is to blame the model, swap to a newer one, or rewrite the prompt. That fixes the surface and leaves the structure intact.
Three structural failures
Forced welds. Stale signals dressed up as triggers. “Concrete and confident” writing when the system has weak data.
The prompt can ask for warmth. It can’t tell the writer when to be quiet.
The fix
A three-axis writer catalog (rules + voice + sequence) with a coverage-tier cascade — write confidently when you have buyer-segment evidence, hedge when you don’t.
This is a smoke-test stub. The full note follows.
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